Learning from Peer Editing (4)

By editing Megan’s introduction paragraph, I learned that we both had very similar thoughts on art especially the point about how important art is. She had started with what art brings to the table and then listed the several kinds of art there is in the world, including the “typical” kinds of art and the kinds of art that are unexpected. That really got me thinking about the several different kinds of art that she had mentioned and how sometimes those like messages on billboards, clothes and advertisements are an additional art form that I had never thought of. So now when I go back to edit my introduction paragraph, I will keep those in mind when discussing the several kinds of art in the world.